"Unchained Desire , like melody, flows ceaselessly, irrespective of the 'dynamic' time....still with two beautiful differences....that it does so silently and yet reverberates..."
Someday, somewhere......he would be with me
Let the world be anywhere, he would be with me
Where I'll be, there he'll be
And where there would be..... just our feelings
Where dawn will break, where sun would shine
In the flashes of your eyes
Where I would sleep in your arms
Under the sheath of pale moonlight
Dont know where this world of ours is
Dont even know if it exists (or not)
A world where this life of mine
Has not turned its back on me.....
Somehow, somewhere.....there is an intoxication in our unity
Like the the life gliding from your lips to mine
Yet our thirsty hearts cry, moan and pine
For that singular world
That nests our esoteric oneness......our UNCHAINED DESIRE
There the sky burns, and the land screams
Where are you ...... my joy, my smile, my life?
Someday...... somewhere......somehow......
He'll be with me..............
6 comments:
hey Debarati Sanket here.
For whom does this poem concern?
Whom are you missing so much?
hey Sanket...writing a romantic poem dsnt necessarily mean that v need to hv that special sm1 in our lives...thought i dnt deny that i do hv that man.....:)
Cool....Although the poem wasn't a literally perfect one but still you rode it well. I think I got most of what you wanted to say.
I just hop you could hone your writing skills a bit and I'm sure you'll do great :)
Cheers!!
hey u r cool once again... this post is worth reading twice...thrice....
hope more good to come...
Cheers life....!
JD
www.jdodyssey.blogspot.com
to comfortably numb
thanks for commenting...i agreee that i really need to work on my writing skills...i feel this was not at all anywhere to my standard to b more harsh on me...u can check out the latest post on delhi multiple blast, that i experienced as an eye witness...thanks for ur comments...do visit my blog agn..
thanks JD for following n commenting on my blog so religiously...
diya :)
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