Wednesday, January 23, 2008


Those Days Are Gone

Those days are gone
When the blue swan
Sung a sweet song
At the break of dawn.

Those days are gone
When noons were spent
Weaving tales of
Fairies and friends.

Those days are gone
When dusk was seen
Through the rickety branches
Of the Holy Green.

And now I pine
To trace the notes
Of that silent song,
To bathe in the rays
Of my faded childhood dawn,
To see my time fly away
In the charms of fairylands,
To cherish the betrothal
Of the pink and amber horizon,
To discover the hidden treasure
In the old, abandoned church,
To breathe for once, a fresh gust of air
Bereft of all the worldly despair.

As I gather the fallen leaves
The foliage that adored my childhood tree,
I try to fill the emptiness that says
Those days are gone.














14 comments:

scintilla said...

Amazing poem! The emotions are expressed very beautifully...and those days are here when the world will witness some great works of writing from you.

Keep writing :)

Nikita Garia said...

d poem was quite emotional..it brought bk d days of mah childhood ;)

kp it up!!

Anonymous said...

debarati... u hav sum hidden talents..! this blog is helping me understand u better, because otherwise ur a very secretive prsn.. porms r a gr8 way 2 reveal ur unconscious... i hope uve enlightened urslf by writing this poem...

Rozita Singh said...

i completely agree with reema!reminds me of my childhood.....

swathy said...

amazing poem debarti!!

Sharodindu said...

Amazing...quite emotional i must say. reminds me of my sweet n sour childhood days.....Keep it up!

Jayanta Deka said...

wow...!
truly emotional... hey how you create the atmosphere to write these stuff... amazing...

keep it up...

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Mystic-Frost said...

thanks aditi for ur comments

Mystic-Frost said...

thanks nikita...that was i wanted to do...

Mystic-Frost said...

hey rima..thanks a lot...but do visit my blog more frequently if u really wana know me buddy :)

Mystic-Frost said...

hey rozi...thanks a lot buddy...i just felt like scribbling smthing down on the time that has gone but still the memories make me so nostalgic :(

Mystic-Frost said...

thanks swati...

Mystic-Frost said...

messenger of nemesis...thanks for visiting my blog...do visit agn
diya

Mystic-Frost said...

hey JD
was my poem so gud that u became a follower of my blog?
:D